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It’s annoying.
It’s annoying to have so much to say, yet not say it.
It’s annoying to feel so brave on the inside, yet on the outside you’re a coward.

Of course I want to beat myself up, but I rather not worry my mother.
All I got is my games and my stories;
Just a little something to keep my mind on.


I feel like I can take on the world.
I feel like I can create a universe.
I feel like I can do anything.

The problem is, I never do it.
My mind wants to focus on something unimportant, and puts goals aside,
And I’m left with useless trivia and forgotten ambitions.
©2009 ~nybx4life
:iconnybx4life:

Author's Comments

....This should be scrapped so badly.

I'll give it life for now.

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:iconsolarflare57:
At least You let it live.
:iconmechanical-dragon:
LIIIIVE!

This is good, and a sentiment I share all to often.

On the structural front, it has an interesting rhythm, and the use of a repeating word in the chorus gives it a solemn tone.

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It's not so much that this is heavy, but the fact that it's melting is something of concern.

"Don't tell them that I meant well." - Adron e'Kieron

Are you a figment of my imagination? Find out in the Inner Struggle OCT hosted by *Bwarchtor
:iconnybx4life:
All things deserve it's two seconds of life.

At least to have it be known to someone else.

--
The greatest type of dude is one that doesn't give up.

So please, even if you don't get much favs or watches, keep going.
:iconnybx4life:
Hmm, I guess Frankenstein gets to stay :nod:

And thanks for the comment:)

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The greatest type of dude is one that doesn't give up.

So please, even if you don't get much favs or watches, keep going.
:iconsolarflare57:
Definately, when I only get a couple veiws its better than nothing, at least I had an audience and without that its hard to do anything.
:icondy-the-c0pyc4t:
:gasp: :omg:
I felt like that too :ohnoes:

=D=D=D

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"You can't achieve something if you don't have the desire for it"
:icondy-the-c0pyc4t:
:gasp: :omg:
I felt like that too :ohnoes:

=D=D=D

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"You can't achieve something if you don't have the desire for it"

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